Assembled cut · CVN-560
7 shots, about 59 seconds. Target was 90s — the narration decides the real length.
The cut
The narration
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The edit
- 01

“The beach is four minutes from the plot, and in August there's enough of it that all five can run off and you can still see them.”
Opens on the middle of the day rather than dusk — the opposite of Sarah's cut, because this is a video about grandchildren.
site - 02

“This is pitch eleven, the widest plot on the water. Marcus, that's the whole side of the lodge, not a gap between two vans.”
He asks practical questions, so establish the plot before anything else.
site - 03

“Dee — that's the lake from the sink. Not a glimpse of it from the corner of the window. All of it.”
She said this twice. Naming her is the difference between a mailshot and a phone call.
site - 04

“Two twin rooms like this one. Four beds, so nobody's on the sofa.”
Five grandchildren was the high-confidence item. Says the number, doesn't labour it.
site - 05

“And somewhere for them to take themselves off to when you've had enough.”
Their 'somewhere for the children to go on their own' item — a shot Sarah's cut would never use.
site - 06

“The table takes all its leaves. Eight round it without anyone eating off their lap.”
Room to all eat together, straight from the profile.
site - 07

“Site fees are five thousand four hundred a year, all in — no extras on top. Sixty-four five for the lodge. Pitch eleven, and the list opens Friday.”
Marcus asked about fees three times. Lead with the number rather than waiting to be asked again.
site
Cut it with Claude
Where it's used
Details
- Customer
- Marcus & Dee Whitcombe
- Wants
- 4-bed with a view, room for the grandchildren
- Caravan
- Willerby Vogue 2024
- Target length
- 90s
- Actual
- 59.48s
Render log
Rendered 7 shots in 11.2s — 59.48s output.